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For Poetry Thursday, for whom we were asked to write a poem using a cliché. I wondered whether I wanted "babies change your life" or "they grow up so fast"; both are apt, and I've never heard either said better. I chose, instead, "just yesterday it seems."
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beneath the dead dogwood
in pieces now from her dad’s
hand saw and a few long days
nestled in the tree’s crotches
sits my daughter’s desk
crooked, sticker covered
marker scribbled
well used.
the all-night rain left a gloss
a puddle in the pencil rest
and a sad sheen all over.
only yesterday it seems
she sat on its bench
and drew our family portrait
us three and two dogs
in front of the house
eggs for hands and feet
a jagged sun smiling upon us.
upstairs a work station
now dominates the room.
we used to joke
about the heavy books
we’d tie to her head
to keep her from growing up.
but our children rocket
through our lives
and one day you find them
too long for your lap
and the next
they are a contrail
and all you have left
of that blur of childhood
is a portrait in pencil
and the warped top
of a sticker-covered desk.
13 Comments:
I love the puddle in the pencil rest, so tactile.
1/11/2007 12:06 PM
[sniffle]
1/11/2007 12:41 PM
This was really wonderful... I don't have children but I can imagine through your very honest poem how it must feel to watch those little babies grow up...
1/11/2007 2:50 PM
They do grow up fast, don't they?
1/11/2007 4:20 PM
My baby's 39. I recently blogged about her first cavity. Just you wait!
This is just fabulous. Best I've read today.
1/11/2007 4:55 PM
The inclusion of the photo...that adds to the bittersweetness of it all. Kids do grow so, so quickly. There's something about all those stickers on the desk... Are you a fellow Baltimorean?
1/11/2007 6:17 PM
I love your line about them being contrails. So bittersweet. What a beautiful poem.
1/11/2007 6:45 PM
Gorgeous.
1/12/2007 6:23 PM
Lovely and so true...I think. I don't have kids either, but I get a snippet of this when my former students return to see me and they are transformed by growth. Especially weird because I don't seem to change at all.
1/12/2007 11:57 PM
this is very poignant. i love hearing poems read aloud.
1/13/2007 2:24 AM
I read the poem and then listened to it, gave my goosebumps, goosebumps means it touched me.
I envy you, I have thoughts and feelings I want to get out but when I try to put them on paper, they lose so much in the translation, the feelings, the memories and the pictures that I have in my mind don't make it to the paper and the words come out dry and tasteless.
1/13/2007 12:57 PM
Even as I dodge V-wing fighters from my head while I sit at the computer, I realize from your poem that I will miss my five-year-old when he is grown. Thanks for reminding me!
I wonder, why was the desk in pieces in the dogwood?
1/15/2007 2:43 PM
Lovely poem, especially nice to hear in your voice. Thank you.
1/16/2007 4:47 PM
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