18 October 2006

Dream Grrrrrl

This poem is dedicated to my crush, who has never known, all these years.


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One night, while you slept,
I captured your breath in my cupped hands,
mixed it with my own, liquored and licentious,
imbued our commingled air with incantations,
made a potion of it with all I had,
then rubbed it on your body
so I would be your dream girl,
and I was for twenty-five years
but you never knew the snarling wolf
who’s hunted you down a rain-slicked street,
past flashing motel lights,
was me.


for Poetry Thursday





8 Comments:

Anonymous Anonymous said...

I like this. I like how it fits (incidently?) the suggested theme- who's avoidance? Was going to read mine in this morning, but the boss showed up early to sit in the next office and I got shy- thinking he'd think I was completely nuts. I'm glad you did it.

10/19/2006 7:58 AM

 
Anonymous Anonymous said...

very nice, I enjoyed reading it and then hearing it, amazingly I had been working on a poem of the same vein, daydream lover, so it was fun to read your thoughts on the same..thanks..m

10/19/2006 8:33 AM

 
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Very interesting. Love how you move from the lightness of the breath into the aggressive yearning of the snarling wolf... my crush lasted for years like that, too.
--Robin

10/19/2006 8:40 AM

 
Blogger Brownie said...

This is good stuff. It brings up lots of visual images. I had a crush for a long time, and now he's mine. :)

10/19/2006 10:02 AM

 
Anonymous Anonymous said...

I love the idea of breath as potion. I may just have to try it...

10/19/2006 12:39 PM

 
Blogger che said...

i knew it all along . i just played dumd --- your crush .

10/19/2006 3:56 PM

 
Blogger Girlplustwo said...

i had a lover i was so mad for i would swallow his exhalations when he slept...convinced that his brand of CO2 was medicinal. maybe it was.

10/22/2006 2:08 PM

 
Blogger NPR Junky said...

OOOOOH!

Very nicely put. I'm in awe, again.

10/24/2006 7:07 PM

 

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