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I kissed your husband in August
one hundred degrees and a decade ago
out back by the trash cans,
"Thunder Road" harmonica spilling
out of the house.
He didn’t know what to do with his hands
push or pull
so they rested on my shoulders
like a question.
I kissed your husband in the guest room
January coats piled on the bed
because he was leaving
and our fingers brushed
as we reached for a glove.
It was an accidental meeting
of fingertips.
It was hotter than July.
I kissed your husband
in June and March
and December and each time
my heart plunged
to the place it goes
on the down of a swing.
I kissed your husband
yesterday
in your kitchen
6:32 on the stove clock
while he carved the roast
and then I went home
and kissed mine.
15 Comments:
Oh my, I really love this one; it reminds me of another you wrote about yearning/dreaming of another man. It was that poem that made me start stalking....oh, um, admiring you.
Lovely, Leslie.
9/14/2006 6:00 PM
This is good, Leslie. All of your stuff is good. But I really like this. So clever.
9/15/2006 8:31 PM
Wow Leslie I really, really like this. So much in so few lines.
Barbara
9/16/2006 8:57 AM
I love the matter-of-factness of this one.
"I kissed your husband
yesterday
in your kitchen
6:32 on the stove clock
while he carved the roast
and then I went home
and kissed mine."
Really brilliant.
9/18/2006 10:18 AM
Oh, wow.
Fantastic.
I love.
9/19/2006 7:04 PM
Wow...
10/04/2006 12:02 PM
Love the line about the hands on the speaker's shoulders, like a question! Brilliant. Again.
11/16/2006 9:48 AM
Really enjoyed this one, especially both the opening and the ending.
11/16/2006 10:25 AM
great poem..loved, it was hotter tan July..nice..m
11/16/2006 10:57 AM
The movement, repetition, reinforces the nostalgia, the distance--all how safe in the past it is. And then you give us the yesterday (with a time signature--makes me think of Hitchcock in the opening of Psycho), which makes it all immediate. Very smart.
11/16/2006 12:17 PM
I want to say everything that everyone else has said and more - but I think I will just say, I second those emotions and BRILLIANT.
11/16/2006 12:59 PM
Wow! I second everything everyone else said! The repetition really works well. And I love this voice, this situation, all these concrete details. I just love this poem.
11/16/2006 1:51 PM
Everyone else has already said everything I would have so I'll just say Wow - fabulous!
11/16/2006 2:08 PM
very clever and amusing... I liked it much, but i guess if ur not lying that must be making the other girl... a desperate housewife...
11/16/2006 2:15 PM
I'm 100% with Ren.Kat. Hands on my shoulders like a question. Fabulous!!
11/16/2006 5:48 PM
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